Sunday, October 30, 2016

Rough Draft (A/a)

Gilman and Dickinson

Comparing Emily Dickinson, the author of many poems and Charlotte Gilman, the author of  The Yellow Wallpaper exposes the reader to a better understanding of feminism and the use of symbolism in writing. They use nature and objects to represent ideas and qualities they wish to convey to the readers. Dickinson and Gilman have two completely different styles of writing, however, they are both able to convey a strong message whether it is about feminism, society or life. They have made their impact and are seen as two influential women writers of the 1800’s.
            In The Yellow Wallpaper the wife’s husband who appeared to have good intentions, but expressed them in a rather oppressive way controls her actions. Despite requesting to move to a different room and to leave the house her husband is blind to her true needs and keeps her confined to her room. “John does not know how much I really suffer. He knows there’s no reason to suffer, and that satisfies him.” (pg. 3). This shows the wife’s true feelings and how she feels her husband does not hear her voice. However, this was a common thought during this time period and Gilman is trying to emphasize that. Although it is supposed to unintentional, the husbands force and the wife’s submission displayed the social dynamics and expectations of how a couple was supposed to act at that time. Due to the restrictions, the wife has to secretly write in her journal even though it is one of the things keeping her sane. “If a physician of high standing, and one’s own husband, assures friends and relatives that there is really nothing the matter with one but temporary nervous depression – a slight hysterical tendency – what is one to do? My brother is also a physician, and also of high standing, and he says the same thing.” (pg. 2) This specific quote also supports the wife’s true feelings about feeling unheard and trapped by those around her. They all say they have good intentions and are doing the right thing, but no one stops to hear the wife’s opinion. Perhaps they don’t care or they think her opinion might be untrue due to her “condition.” Soon after the wife expresses her personal opinion to the reader again and twice she says, “But what is one to do?” as if even though she wants to voice her thoughts she knows it won’t make a difference and no one would listen. “Personally, I disagree with their ideas. Personally, I believe that congenial work, with excitement and change, would do me good. But what is one to do?” (pg. 2) Throughout her time stuck and isolated in her room, the wife becomes mesmerized with the wallpaper and eventually feels a connection to the woman who she finds behind it trying to free herself. Similar to the woman the wife shares the wish to be freed. Towards the end when she tears down the wallpaper she seems to be going almost a bit crazy and in a good way. She is finally reaching the freedom she has longed for. “’I’ve got out at last,” said I, “in spite of you and Jane? And I’ve pulled off most of the paper, so you can’t put me back! “now why should that man have fainted? But he did, and right across my path by the wall, so that I had to creep over him every time!’” (pg. 10) It is peculiar the way her husband “faints” or even dies as can be inferred by the reader, because the wife is now is free and walks over him every time she leaves. Gilman uses this symbolization to highlight feminism since the wife now has to walk over and away from her husband every time she leaves. The difference being that now she is  a freed woman.
Gilman was inspired to write this story, because it is almost a mirror of an experience she had personally where she was told after having a nervous breakdown to sit at home and live her life doing nothing. Her feminism is highlighted when she ends the story with the wife tearing down the wallpaper and stepping into freedom. This freedom is free from the terrible room and her overbearing husband. The ending is abrupt and encourages women to speak up for themselves. It also leaves the reader wondering what true freedom looks like.
            Emily Dickinson wrote an extensive amount of poems all of which have an impactful message in them. Her style and choice in poetry is very different in length and style than Gilman yet she is still able to convey a message. One example of short and powerful poem is Fame is a Bee. “Fame is a bee.  It has a song – It has a sting – Ah, too, it has a wing.” This poem uses a bee to represent how fame often “flies” and fortunes different people at different times. The “wing” representing the rise in fame and the “song” meaning fame does have perks and is a wonderful thing. However, the “sting” symbolizes the pressure and other bad things that accompany fame. Dickinson loved nature and uses a bee, which by itself is meaningless and yet she is able to convey a message about the reality of society and fame to her readers.  Another example is In this short life that only lasts an hour. “In this short life that only lasts an hour. How much – how little – is within our power.” Only consisting of two lines and still the poem holds such a powerful message. Obviously our lives are not only an hour, but she uses an hour to show how little time we have on earth in the big scheme of things. The poem is a wake up call and almost a kind of warning saying to the readers that they should make the most of the short time they have in life, because people can’t control time or their lives even if sometimes they like to think they can.  With the small amount we have we should make it worthwhile and not waste our lives doing nothing important.
The more popular poems by Dickinson have to do with mortality such as Because I could not stop for death, which is not surprising since death chose to reappear a lot in her life. She is also known for using her voice subtly or not so subtly to share she did not believe a woman should submit to men and women should not surrender their hopes and dreams for a man. Her room was a place of freedom where her imagination could flow freely through her poetry. Locking the door was a symbol of leaving the real world behind and being able to be as creative as she could.

            When two similar yet different authors come together they are able to project quite a message. They were both supporters of feminism and the idea that a woman should have a room to herself to be as free and creative as she wanted. In their own ways they were able to educate people about feminism and communicate their thoughts on it even though it was through their work. The readers could be other women who relate to the authors ideas and need to be encouraged or just the general public who need to be educated about feminism. It may seem like a small thing, but they had influential voices. In Gilman’s The Yellow Wallpaper the woman behind the wallpaper symbolized the wife being trapped behind her husband and her old self. She became the wallpaper and was finally able to break free physically and emotionally from it. Without symbolism the message would not be as bold. Dickinson on the other hand always used symbolism in her poems whether it was with nature or people. People are able to see the importance and power of symbolism and how they can be used to relay a message. When brought side-by-side people are able to see two women who lived at different times able to share some of the same beliefs with the world around them.

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